I like the beat

who spit 1st?

when you said "day", it sounded like "SDAY, SDAY"

flow is coo tho...

lyrics are lackluster...topics like this one are common. So, you have to come with creative imagery to pull them off

wassup with the pause between the 1st verse and the hook? I thought the track was over already...


decent track...lacks appeal though
Feed used 1-18-06 "lord i want to live again"



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