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Damn mentalz this was a tight drop i was really feeling it you had nice emotions and very good feelings going into your drop made it very poetic..you had a nice topic and very creative concept behind it..your wordplay and vocab was decent it could have been alittle better but overall i was really feeling this drop the only thing that could have been alot better was your structure and the stretched lines other then that pretty kool job.
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