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Old 01-20-06, 06:42 PM   #8
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this was very hard to read... mostly cuz that avy is so annoying lol
neways....
ok drop... my fav lines are
'The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook
That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks'


good multis, lyrics are solid for the most part, you want to avoid corny/played wordplay (reign/weather), braggin verses have a tendency to get borin n repetitive, but u keep this one alive with some fresh lines

rtf on my om, link in sig
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