Aligned to newbies. I know you thinking I’m no better
Yall Simple minds aint hard to read unlike Rosetta
The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook
That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks
Speak against me I’ll attack-yer vernacular, this aint basics
With statements breaking ya language in 8 places
Changes mood, my rhymes prelude they shape shifts
The way I surprise, eyebrows move, I make face lifts
Refined may game quick so I’m able to say this. I
Renovated my room for improvement and made Space-ships

Switch it up
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Rozetta uh… no better
Hoes, not stepping to Stone you know better
Aint no pulling me down, I’m no lever
Strong hands making you fold so don’t bet her
So fresh.. And just so clever
I reign heavy on any land, I’m so weather
Rozetta Stone better than your average savage
As I’m handling hammers like judge Mathis
Flow, oh so precise, cutting on edge
You need shape ups ya cuts are just jagged
Bastards… with this I’ll retort
You Kids stand weak, needing child support
Wilder force than Anakin, torch you mannequins
No dick to ride so you just band wagoning
Get ya dome rocked I’m all about fame
U rugs get shitted this bitch isn’t house trained
Tailored styling to your liking elevation has heightened
Since I link words together better than a hyphen

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2624685
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219719

The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook
That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks
Tailored styling to your liking elevation has heightened
Since I link words together better than a hyphen

i liked those lines the best, this was okay, some stuff was played, but overall, it was creative, and fresh, better than most cats dropping in here, so, props to that.....you have a nice style, so, work with it, i guess, keep up

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This Was Ok, Nothing Above Average.....The Lines Weren't Constructed To Amaze The Reader And The Rhyming Was Too Basic....6-10

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So ma nice intro welcome to RV again,...

Liked this bar !!

So fresh.. And just so clever
I reign heavy on any land, I’m so weather

Nice spit, alright flow nice vocab,,... really decent verse.

Stay up

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This was a pretty decent drop..some bars were really creative and had some nice punchlines..others were just played,Your structure was decent..And you have a pretty creative style..keep it up.

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thanx yall. this is mos def not my best shit. i wrote this in about 9 mins

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bump bump bump like b2k

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this was very hard to read... mostly cuz that avy is so annoying lol
neways....
ok drop... my fav lines are
'The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook
That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks'

good multis, lyrics are solid for the most part, you want to avoid corny/played wordplay (reign/weather), braggin verses have a tendency to get borin n repetitive, but u keep this one alive with some fresh lines

rtf on my om, link in sig

This drop surprised me. I wasn't expecting to see something like this from somebody new to the board, but I must say, I was pleasently surprised. You had some played comcepts thrown around in there, but overall this was a solid introductory track. Multies were good, and you stayed consistent. I like that. I also like long walks on the beach, and a warm sandwich.

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thabx yall i got other shit for yall to peep

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You should like...Post it an shit.

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I will dont worry. i do have a life outside of the net so typing up my shit is not my 1st priority

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i like how you can switch up your style..
the verse was decent ..
much better then alot of newbs ive read from

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

pretty good for an rv female...shit composed of mainly us dudes and shit cuz most the chicks jus post they pics in member mugshots for attention then bounce but n e ways nice piece liked the wordplay and vocab was basic but flow n structure was on point 4 the most part liked the punches u used keep ma and continue posting peace...btw rtf on my new shit titled new shit ty...p.s. im the most hated next 2 reign because rv seems 2 think im a bitch so if u get n e free post dissin me in here you kno why...one word haters! 1

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my new shit peep