Voted For: Tech Skillz

You couldnt lyricaly hurt me if u had rapz stocked-with-nailz
Couldnt get a 'signed' record deal like the contractz-in-'brail'
pretty decent line
Cuz Solo alwayz spitz at a range-with-the-heat
Tech writez his name on his shoez and claimz hez got his name-on-the-street
played
I got lotz of punchez, man i got a ton-of-it
even if u were sprintin though the sewer u couldnt be 'runnin-shit'
played
Ill lyricaly kill and put the glock-away
wanna shoot! bitch u aint got the 'juice' to 'squeeze' even if u 'concentrate'
played
Im a heavy spitter, and im drinkin-weightz
Ill put a 'ruler' through your brain so can be thinkin-'straight'
ok line nothing special
Dont even spit dog, just save-ya-linez
Cuz Ill take out ya brain with my handz and make you change-ya-mind
pretty cool closer that opener had em thinking u were dope then i read the rest of it very dissapointing structure was fucked you need to work on personals and creativity

I'll Leave You Flipped, Heated, And Rolled Up Like Tortilla's
I'd Ask You What You'll Become.........
.......But In Year I'll Hit Up 'On The Border' To See Ya'
haha funny personal
I'll Place You In A Casket, Dig Your Grave And You'll Be An Underground Artist
No Bobody Knows Were You Will-is..............
decent line could be worded better
Til I Make You My Hostage
Flash Through The Mist, Clenched Fist To Leave You Twitchin'
Your Spits Couldn't Do Shit To Me....Even If Your Breath Was Kickin!
horrible line
Solo? That Ain't A Sayin, It's How You Stand On The Stage
You Can Wine Up For Years.......And Still Not Get Better With Age!
first line is good second is all filler
Man Over Board! Fuck, We'll Let The Sharks Eat This Mate
It'll Be Bumpy Ride.....
....Especially When I Run Over The Acne On Your Face!
ok closer

im giving this to you because u had a personal u need to work on ur structure it messes up the flow also try and up ur vocab

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