Thread: D523 vs *Antic*
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Old 01-24-06, 03:23 PM   #11
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From: Adanac
This was feedback posted for D523

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Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'//
^comics and jokes usually don't have funny names, but funny material....plus, the punch has horrible wording
Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'...
His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'//
^ how is his style like rotting flesh falling off? that doesn't make sense, and i doubt he's a lepper
I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'...
His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'//
man, say some real shit...his style's not a book, you are not hitler...and the punch is played
I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'...
Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'//
d of 5 guys? wtf? you're number 23? WTF?....not a bad punch, horrible wording and concept is played
I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders...
Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'//
^best punch in the battle, shoulda said posters though, cause i dont pin up my pictures, i frame them
Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
^who cares about seeing crack, thats a fucking bad thing, and the punch fuggin sucked

Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
^played concept, but not bad
Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed
Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy*
^barely rhymes, but not bad, kinda gay though
Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right...
I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like!
^played concept
It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me
I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique
^creative, wording poorly though
It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch
But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch”
^concept played, and you didn't take his lunch
My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
^oooh, seen this before as well *smh*, not bad
Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe
That when battling me?? You audio league***
^a good punch if not bitten, this won the battle

yeah, both you need to step up, d523 won this because he had better overall punches, other dude, you need to get ideas of better concepts, word
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