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Old 01-25-06, 08:03 AM   #3
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Sup this was really dope, I can relate coz as I kid I always wanted to go in
space,.. and your always left thinking where dose space end !! and where does
it begin!! It use to well bug me.

Nice complexity,. good structure, flowed really well, good use of vocab
this was a really nice verse... The close gave it the extra kick it had
real meaning and a very good read.

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