Voted For: D523



Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension
^^
good punch cuz you flipped the stick out* wordplay new, with a clever metaphor
-My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver
Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver**
^^ good wordplay, decent punch, i was ganna use that wide receiver concept before.
vs.

Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'...
Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
^^ this if u worded it better, and most of your stuff wasn't really worded right
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anyway return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983

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