aight dis beat choice is nice...1st cat not really feelin u dawg lyricz is ok flows decent as well as delivery they both need sum work really a lil polishing in those areas will help u out alot...2nd cat lyricz is coo flow & delivery are sharper then da 1st dude...overall tho dis song was decent really could've been betta...but its all about elevation nahmean ya'll...keep it up...

rtf...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196