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02-01-06, 01:17 PM | #1 | |||||
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Never change feat Snypa
IP: BB77 E4BA
yoo, me and Snypa did a little collab over the "never change" beat by Jay-z. this is some hot shit right here yo
check it out: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459856 1st verse-me 2nd verse-Snypa links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219564 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219025
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02-01-06, 01:34 PM | #2 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
uppin for feed....................................
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02-01-06, 01:41 PM | #3 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: B397 C96F
One Mic - You had an ok verse, some ok rhymes. Your flow was decent and it had ok quality.
5/10 Snypa - You had a good flow in that verse, I liked your rhymes, your quality was good. Stay Up. I liked the if I fall off I'll quit rap line. 7.5/10 OVERALL SONG - It was an ok song. Snypa owned it with his verse. One Mic you need to work on your flow abit, and get your rhymes to sound better and up your vocab. 6/10
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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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02-01-06, 01:42 PM | #4 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
aight thanx for the feed man. uppin for more..................
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02-01-06, 01:47 PM | #5 | |||||
P.S.A**DYNASTY
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IP: 8630 C252
one mic.....................
voice is kinda plain but ight............. flow was on and off.........ok for most part....................... no pressence or emotion.................... lyrics were good............................ delevery was ight....................... snypa.............................. good flow............................... good delevery ...................... nice pressence and emotion.................. quality was ight on this.............................. notta bad track though 7/10 keep up one mic return tha favour
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02-01-06, 03:21 PM | #6 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
thanx for the feed yo. uppin......................
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02-02-06, 11:34 AM | #7 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
uppin this........................................
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02-02-06, 01:55 PM | #8 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E993 F166
bummmmmmmmppppppppppp....why this bein slept on?
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02-02-06, 03:21 PM | #9 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
aight dis beat choice is nice...1st cat not really feelin u dawg lyricz is ok flows decent as well as delivery they both need sum work really a lil polishing in those areas will help u out alot...2nd cat lyricz is coo flow & delivery are sharper then da 1st dude...overall tho dis song was decent really could've been betta...but its all about elevation nahmean ya'll...keep it up...
rtf...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196 |
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02-02-06, 09:12 PM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 1B87 F8F8
aiight, thanks for the feed bro
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