Ok short drop. I wasn't feeling it, you should've add more details and this would've been good along with your imaginary skillz, plus your concept wasn't that much appealing, next time be more creative. The flow was cool, the content was cool, i would advise you took work on creativity, imaginary a lil bit and emotions, this was good but needs improvement...chio.

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