beats ok, not feelin the clap n how the drums are made.... first verse: flow is extremely robotic/stoppy, starty... delivery needs improving lyrics are cool, hook is cool, 2nd verse i same really.. 3rd verse: flow is better, still needs improvement, delivery is more or less same, lyrics are cool that effect is fucked up tho, wow that was short... and another verse flow is better n it fell off badly as pronunciation went off aswell flow is much better on this verse.... yeh not really feelin it but there is potential in both heads on it.. keep it up.