hmmm the first guy...
the beat is good but you need to up your emotion. you need to act more confident and feel the sorrow in the topic. the lyrics were good, your flow was meh and it seems effected by your emotion. quality needs work a lot. and you need a few effects on the hook.

2nd guy:
quality is horrible as well, lyrics were good. emotion lacks as well, really work on being more smooth with the beat and even as I said for soul you should as well try to feel more confident to the topic.

overall decent track.....up quality and emotion for both.

LOL I feel so robotic right now...

rtf on my trickle shit with LE

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