Im struggling with the problems of everyday life
Cant deal with it,I want to end the everyday strife
I have an itching buzz to end this feeling of pain
Lurking is tha killer waiting for his chance to slain
Then plain as day the haters tore him limb from limb
Suddenly the light to heaven wasnt seeming so dim
That calamity put me into a great state of depression
My life was caving in and i cant escape tha compression
I couldnt give up, didnt want to wind up on a flat line
Why waste this great life and this even greater mind
It feels like im trapped and cant get through this phase
Where im in a craze...trying to find a way out this maze
Tears of blood come pouring from out my eye when i cry
Thats how i figured i was gonna die...From being bled dry
I wasnt liked or cared for so like a typical child, i felt i failed
Worked my way up,triumphed over them all and i prevailed

Just kinda came to me so i added it to tha 10 lines i had before so i just kinda added tha last 6 lines to it...Not great but its tha first OM i have done in awhile...So leave feed rate it if you want...Word...1

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222811

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222834


^^Those are tha links to tha OMs i left feed on