that beat is the lamest thing ive ever heard

first rapper isnt even beat.. and adlibs are way off.. work on that.. vocals are to loud your ontop of the beat not in it

you should have not just done adlibs makes it sound like garbage

m.i. you are kinda on beat...your emotion is ok but you delevery isnt bieleveable... and soem really played lines in there... and your last line is garbage

ok q is actually on beat.. good work. and his adlibs are a little better.. but vocals are also to loud..

q. 8/10
m.i. 6/10
cho 5/10

ive heard alot better from you guys... life aint worth no pancakes man.. thanx for mentionen me in the song also.. mad ups

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