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03-01-06, 02:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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B EZ Ft M.I and Tha Q
IP: C527 8B3F
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3573348
"b EZ" DONT SLEePPPPPPPPPPP links---------------------------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223378 Enygma - Q left feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223347 Sam i am - Feed left by tha Q
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03-01-06, 03:13 PM | #2 | ||||
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that beat is the lamest thing ive ever heard
first rapper isnt even beat.. and adlibs are way off.. work on that.. vocals are to loud your ontop of the beat not in it you should have not just done adlibs makes it sound like garbage m.i. you are kinda on beat...your emotion is ok but you delevery isnt bieleveable... and soem really played lines in there... and your last line is garbage ok q is actually on beat.. good work. and his adlibs are a little better.. but vocals are also to loud.. q. 8/10 m.i. 6/10 cho 5/10 ive heard alot better from you guys... life aint worth no pancakes man.. thanx for mentionen me in the song also.. mad ups
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03-01-06, 07:36 PM | #3 | |||
OYD
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Good lookin on this Cho
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03-01-06, 09:03 PM | #4 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
listenin...
...not feelin beat 1st verse- nice lyrics and tite voice...pretty good delivery and emotion...propz 2nd verse- another nice voice...really nice delivery, emotion and flow...decent lyrics, this is a ncie verse... 3rd- voice doesnt go great with others but that dont affect the verse...good lyrics...good delivery and nice flow...good job LMAO!!! at the outro, that pancake line jsut raised the song upp like 3 whle #'s overall- i think this song has a ton of potential and would be SO DOPE, but i honestly dont think this is the rite beat for that song,,, good job on the verse tho yall, they themsekves were hott *btw coulld yall rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showt...291#post2674291 Last edited by eastcoast : 03-01-06 at 09:07 PM. |
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03-01-06, 09:10 PM | #5 | |||
OYD
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^^yea well...I'm a different person...I aint fittin to sound like them bro
preciate feed tho 1 |
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03-01-06, 09:43 PM | #6 | ||||||
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^lol, yea i wasnt dissin you or anything jsut sayin that the other two voices were very similar, its actually kinda good your voice is original...so no hate bruh
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03-02-06, 05:47 PM | #7 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: C527 8B3F
thanks for the feeds .... even you cough douche cough ...j
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03-04-06, 09:43 PM | #8 | |||
OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
slow flow's remarkable
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03-11-06, 02:16 PM | #9 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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holy sheeeeeeeeppppp shit
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03-11-06, 04:53 PM | #10 | |||
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