alright first thing is the beat is pretty cool. so thurdfshift did a good job with that.

alright your hook. i know everyone alredy said it but i didnt like it too much. it jus seems like there something missing. maybe recording it a couple more times or something. not really sure.

verses were defintely good. not great but good. lyrically i think you've stepped up from previous tracks.

good track man. keep it up