Flyweight
From: Chicago-U Already Know |
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1st. Im So sorry to hear that, I send my blessing to you and your family....
2nd. This Drop was nice, i can tell this was from the heart, by the way it flowed, I love the story scenario, cuz i can picture it....that just made ya piece...
Ya vocab was decent, just a little etchy in some parts, edit some of the typos....
I can feel what your going thru in the piece, it hit home.,.....
Overall very nice piece....Looking forward to seein more...
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