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03-01-06, 01:35 PM | #1 | |||
Dont Fuck With Me! EZ....
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when hes lung collaps * TRUE STORY *
IP: F696 0620
i remeber the days we was chilling on the block, smoking weed in da lot
an everyone in the team was hot, cuz everywhere you go da d's on the spot but you keep doing your husstle, its a everyday life struggle didnt understand why da harraisment? cuz it only start trouble but they hate when you dont have W-2's and you making more then double cuz they cant figuer out how can you use coke to bubble and im so hot now a days i dont understand how im not a vapor an when im with marry-J they try and take-us, a H.S drop out that learn tree's can make paper sometime i wounder where life gonna take us, cuz its a ruff rode matter of fact its the worse rode, it get me in the worse mode since im so fucking pissed i understand the doctor slang but when he said a certine name is rang a certine bell in my head, that had me like what THE FUCK HE SAID? learn the other day my brother gonna be in the hospitol bed turn my happyness to burnt out emotion whats the comotion about, doc said you might wanna take a seat perhapz i rather not since the doc told me stright up my brother lung collaps WHAT!!! its the worse day of my life, lost my best friend from shots at night everyday we at war like nights, but this aint a gang rivel you wanna fight the doctors is right, if you dont get help might as well kiss you good-nite its the worse day of my life, my brother lung collaps N hes pain draining my life!! stuck in a phaze, face amaze like you gotta be crazy dont tell me that shit, where he at, doc why you tryin to play me? burst into tears, drop to the floor wanting to die right here plez tell me hes gonna live a couple more years?... as the news soked-in, the hope drop to rock bottom feel like eminem is calling me, cuz if he split then my wrist i gotta slit shit why this is happing to me, why can i take that risk? what i gotta do feeling like GOD did me wrong when im faithfully REPP'IN from he's CREW *R.I.C.H* i feel like rip'in my own lung out and switching since the news my body wont stop twitchin all of a sudden babymoms stop bitch and want to listen i gotta go!! to much for me right now!
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03-01-06, 11:32 PM | #2 | ||||
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1st. Im So sorry to hear that, I send my blessing to you and your family....
2nd. This Drop was nice, i can tell this was from the heart, by the way it flowed, I love the story scenario, cuz i can picture it....that just made ya piece... Ya vocab was decent, just a little etchy in some parts, edit some of the typos.... I can feel what your going thru in the piece, it hit home.,..... Overall very nice piece....Looking forward to seein more...
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03-03-06, 11:57 AM | #3 | |||
Dont Fuck With Me! EZ....
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IP: F696 0620
thanks for the feed back it is a serious issue and thanks for your reguard to my brother situation i appericated it really means alot to me right now if you believe me or not so thanks
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