listenin...

...i cant really hear the vocals homie...1st-lyrics are good but flow does need work...the emotion and lyrics are there but you just need to work on your quality and flow...chorus is pertty good too...2nd-good emotion just liek the other dude...flows a lil bit better then other dudeds but still need to be worked on....3rd- same as other two versesoverall all verses have good emotioon and lyrics but need work on quality and flow...i like the beat, lol....

could ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420