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03-02-06, 12:26 PM
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{Peep}One Time Ft. Beneficial {Peep}
IP: 1DB0 47F5
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3578069
^^^peep and i'll return the favour. 1st link i fed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...804#post2674804 2nd link i fed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2674806
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03-03-06, 01:05 PM
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IP: 1DB0 47F5
damn no feedback.
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03-03-06, 02:30 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
beat is tight i'm workin on a track for that beat right now... vocals need to be upped ... flow is blah... all around it needs some work.. just elevate
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03-05-06, 10:12 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
listenin...
...i cant really hear the vocals homie...1st-lyrics are good but flow does need work...the emotion and lyrics are there but you just need to work on your quality and flow...chorus is pertty good too...2nd-good emotion just liek the other dude...flows a lil bit better then other dudeds but still need to be worked on....3rd- same as other two versesoverall all verses have good emotioon and lyrics but need work on quality and flow...i like the beat, lol.... could ya rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420 |
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