you def got a nice flow. except for sometimes where its not clear as to what ur saying but i do that too so i shouldnt even say that lol i agree with east coast u should turn the beat down and up your vocals a bit. didnt like the way u ended it. but its a pretty decent track.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223448

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