Antic-
First off I think u should of dimmed down your multis a little bit because the flow fell of sometimes..Still important even in text..But anyways, the beginning was good, flow and structure fell off at times. Vocab was decent, and so was the punches and wordplay..Multis were good for the most part and same with the metas. Finisher seemed pretty played out.

Overall-Straight verse, just dim down your multis to work the flow better. Up your punches as well..

Carmelo-Beginning was nice..Flow was on point..Your structure was different though, Lol..Vocab was nice, punches and wordplay was def. dope..Multis were pretty good, and so was the metas..Finisher was nice..

Overall-Straight verse just up on your structure a bit..

VOTE-Carmelo because his punches were a little more effective then Antics even though he was nice as well, just Carm came a little stronger thats all..props to both emcees
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