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Old 03-19-06, 11:54 AM   #4
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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decent beat....... good hook...... i usually take out the ansane..... whos the first guy???? hes got some good hook ability, but his lyrics aint that good, real real real commercial, hes real good at it, like his shit could be on the radio easily

nice switch up with u to go alil faster, its alil harder to understand wat ur doin, up ur delivery alil bit, u dont sound like u mean wat u sayin until like halfway in it....... it seems like it takes u alil while to get into spittin ur verse

this track was decent overall, nuthin to complain about a sorta club track with a good hook and beat...... keep it up
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