You got a good presence on this track. You flow pretty well also. Only complaint I would have would be your quality just a little. Your dubs were off just a little also. I wasn't feeling the empty hook.....should have filled it up with something. Second verse needed the same energy as the first. Flow sounded a little choppy, could use a couple more takes. Keep elevating though

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