lol.. first.. fix the quality haha.. i know u can do better with that mr. army guy lol.. but yea.. other than that, ur flow, delivery, and lyrics were on point.. but hey fam.. i would like to see a song with you actually not tryin to fit 20 words in one line haha.. it could be a challenge for you.. i mean not to be mean.. like ur style's cool.. jst try to do something with a flow tahts not as fast.. yea there u go tahts wut i mean hehe.. but yea nice song.. damn all these old skewl heads doing alot of songs.. im comin back =P

rtf feed plz mr. army guy

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224929

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