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Old 03-24-06, 12:56 AM   #9
Jay Rose
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you already heard the quality stuff....and you already heard the props on ya flow, lyrics, n delivery....my only addition to what people said was in the first verse...the backround vocals seemed a lil off....it took away from the verse....the second verse was good....so yea....listen to it again n try n fix that maybe.....either turn it down or somethin is just sounds off.....but nothing taken away from you tho.....great track man....your one of the few im starting to respect in here
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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