nice intro beat is soundin good so far....
nah i dont know what willa is talkin emotion is straight on this.. i think this part is the hook... you should do somthin to make it stand out a lil more....good flow good lyrics i dont like the voice on the first verse its dif...quality on this is ok... but words arnt as clear as they could or should be...yeah... hook kicks back in ... i like this hook iz pretty dope...kinda catchy...damn nygma... shiz is hot... i like his flow.. good emotion...good delivery...good lyrics...nyg outshined unf a lil on this track....hook kicks back in its wearing on me i'm startin to like it more ....oh no third verse thats shitty....oh well.. shit was a pretty decent track...8/10 good work yo
rtf
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