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"Mother's Crooked Smile"
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04-03-06, 01:31 PM
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~Babylon~
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wow this was ill!......
imagery was amazing....the metaphors are still dancing around in my head....i loved it...the natrual rythm tha was created was amazing it gluided smoothly from word to word....
great drop!
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