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Old 04-03-06, 11:09 PM   #5
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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*listenin* beat is decent....... synths are aight, but sumtimes they start soundin to repetitive

decent hook, i love how u always got the good emotion, most people are way too busy tryna say the raps and flowin it........ pretty nice verse, nice mixin on that lil break with the person talkin about how u sed jesus

lol, kinda funny hook..... this shit is pretty good right now, but its like a club trakc, but not one at the same time....... tyson fans lose ur bets...... hah the beginnin of third verse sounds weird and ur real messin around lmao..... stir crazy.... u almost havin alil too much fun on this verse.... lmao, it kinda seemes like some Eminem "Rain Man" shit with the last verse but with alot better verses

decent shit, but i like ur more serious shit alil more..... please RTF, u give the best feed and i really wanna know wat u think about this track:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...18&page=1&pp=15
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