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Old 04-04-06, 07:53 AM   #4
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
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Drop links !!!

This wasn't to bad it started well had alright flow, didn't have to much
vocab rhyming was kind of off to predictable.

I liked the message, but you kind of fell off at the end your syllable count
started to grow and just kind of messed the whole thing up.

This was an alright drop, keep writing and get more complex it will come to
you in time.

Stay up

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