beat - Ti's "what u know"
the acts of today lead me to this...





hey, hey, hey, hey, hey, hey here we go....


as i roll threw in life, i realize the changes.
blacks and whites stroll together, no more engages.
of crimes, so no one hated.those are old skool ages.
its like a large book of life, continue threw them pages.
its all in the past cus now we care for one another.
we like family now, almost like sister's & brothers.
huggin each other, bloods and crips putin down colors.
formin more important groups to care for each other.
goin threw tough times, so we cant hold no grudge.
them kkk comin with there racist shit, but we dont budge.
we push back harder then b4, showin them the door.
we got to face this problem now, so are kids dont face them 2morrow.
the dont have to borrow our problems of old skool sorrow.
let the ppl know we still here standing strong, where we belong.
we all over the world usa, russia, nicaragua all the way 2 hong kong.
showin what we all about, and showin what life should be like.
and the only way i know how to do that is threw this mic.
so im tellin u now, quit this racist revolution, make it a retribution.
lets stop this all the shit cus its like a toxic pollution.
fuems in our face stoping our evolution with no solution.
an execution for blacks, and latins with no resolution.
its sad that in there own country they cant walk the street.
with out gettin beat and striped down pulled by there feet.
a mother fuckin virus we must delete. lets bring it 2 a defeat.
i repeat lets stop this racist shit and cause it to excrete.

hope u like it. and leave feed ppl !!!

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uppin for feed.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

uppin for feed... come on ppl, dont sleep on this

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Drop links !!!

This wasn't to bad it started well had alright flow, didn't have to much
vocab rhyming was kind of off to predictable.

I liked the message, but you kind of fell off at the end your syllable count
started to grow and just kind of messed the whole thing up.

This was an alright drop, keep writing and get more complex it will come to
you in time.

Stay up

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yeah pretty good u getting better u kept good with the flow and structure

ur lines were nice and flowmatic.they rymed wat can i say nice..good preformance

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nice i liked it it was ight
flow was nice so was structure
wordplay was ight
ur rhymes didnt fall off much
i liked readin it it was ight not the best ive seen but it was ight
ovral i give it a 7/10

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uppin for feed ppl...

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This was good deep shit I liked the flow and vocab just keepin writing and you'll be at the top rtf link in sig

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dont sleep on this Rv.

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this was ok...decent message in there.....flow was ok from how I read it....structure was decent...overall decent read keep at it and elevating homie

uppin to the top...

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niiiicee. didnt know u had skillz hahahaha anyways, this is something outta ur style so i give u thumbs up for that. u did good here allthough u could have open'd it a different way.
like:

as i stroll in this world i see the difference.
from the past racisit shit is still with existence. <--- kinda lame but something like that u know.
kk whokidd keep trying though u ever need help u know where to catch me.
oo flow was a tiny bit off on some parts but it gets better and u need to work on ur structure.

uppin this shit.

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