What's hot:
Hook is too manufactured...the singin is good, but UNF...what was that? lol...no hate, but you sounded scared to sing...

Flow is standard = not bad
Lyrics = stock = not bad

What's not:

This dang beat and the dang song it came from.
UNF...ur vocals sound low and smothered...not sure if it's Purevolume's fault or not



Overall: decent track bro...concept is underdeveloped and over used, IMO

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"