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Old 04-07-06, 11:46 AM   #1
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****So Sick Remix****Unf And Farrah****Leave Links I'll RTF!

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www.purevolume.com/unf

Yeah Click "So Sick Ft Farrah"

Tell me what you think,a diff style from my normal kinda tracks,going on my "Hands I Shake" mixtape if you think its good.

I'll update with links

Verse one:unf/farrah
Hook:farrah
Verse 2:Unf
Hook:farrah
Verse 3:farrah
Hook:farrah
Outro:farrah and unf
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Old 04-07-06, 12:55 PM   #2
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Old 04-07-06, 01:03 PM   #3
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yooooo man

yerrr this is a real nice track, cuz i like the original so i knew this was gonna be good anyway haha

your first verse is sick, you actually suit this style really well...you're deliverys perfect for this type of track....flow stays on beat nicely....lyrics are fine for this kinda song..
yerrr this Farrah persons got a nice voice, not the best ive heard but still quite impressive, she does the hook and the 3rd verse pretty well i thought.....
yerrr your 2nd verse is just the same really, real nice yo...

nice track man 8/10 i actually prefer this to the original Ne-yo track haha
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Old 04-07-06, 01:30 PM   #4
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LOL Thans a lot man...........uppppppppp
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Old 04-09-06, 08:13 PM   #5
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What's hot:
Hook is too manufactured...the singin is good, but UNF...what was that? lol...no hate, but you sounded scared to sing...

Flow is standard = not bad
Lyrics = stock = not bad

What's not:

This dang beat and the dang song it came from.
UNF...ur vocals sound low and smothered...not sure if it's Purevolume's fault or not



Overall: decent track bro...concept is underdeveloped and over used, IMO
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Old 04-10-06, 01:18 PM   #6
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Ha Ha I Tried To Sing On It

But It Sucked So I Deleted That Shit,Yeah It's Pure Volume I Think.


Thanks Man...
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Old 04-16-06, 07:02 PM   #7
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BoOOOOooooOOO @ u using this beat yo...........

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nice come in..good work on clarity i ben tellin u bout bro....this beats wayyyyyyy to sad yo....not for this song...jus for anyone...lol....idk about ur dubs on the hook.....nice lil track bro
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Old 04-16-06, 08:30 PM   #8
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U.N.F. your vocal levels are nyce but on the hook, too loud cuz the singer's needs to be turned up...track's nyce...definetly a good remix ya got here...with better production, this would be a good remix ready to play on the radio...the singer's got a pretty good voice and the lyrics are good throughout

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Old 04-16-06, 08:43 PM   #9
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I tried to listen to it, i really did, but i don't do sentimental tracks, sorry man
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ok...

ya lyrics were aiight.... still sounds like the same style ya been doing... just changed ya content... i actually liked the original before they started playing the hell outta it on every radio station every ten minutes or so...

ya singer... i think omma hafta pull a simon cowell on her... she's off key.. if ya listen to the pitch of da music and the pitch in her voice it's too distinctly different sounds... any real singer or musician would be able to pick up on that... don't get me wrong... she got potential but she needs more practice... either that or learn to work some studio magic on her vocals... hell, Al B. Sure couldn't sing for shyt but he had the girls panties wet... (until he sang live at the Apollo... career went to shyt after that...lol) ...she needs to work on her riffs also... they sound kinda generic

ya second verse was REEEEEEEEEALLL short... it was look the hook was da verse and ya verse was da hook...lol...

this woulda been a good remix if you formatted the song better... keep ya verses pretty much da same length... then you can punch ya hooks in... it's almost like ya had an incomplete direction for the song...

not a bad attempt though... don't put this on ya mixtape without fixing the flaws first... one
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