being white im jealous...cuz if i did a white power song id be hung alive.....ya emotion on the black power seems lame....you should reall emphasize that....sounds like theres a hiss in the backround distracting me from you words...but id didnt sound bad, so flow was ight....yep more more emotion....has potential to be a real good song...but as is, its average...re-do this song, and up emotion and it could be real good...nice concept n shit tho

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