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04-11-06, 04:40 AM | #1 | |||||
Is Betta Than You
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*!~*!~*!~black Power*!~*!~*!~ Young Law New Shyt!!
IP: F7F9 B52B
yeah i know i been gone for a minute, but i recently had some motivation, and said fuck it, dusted the mic off and did some shit
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3775459 word up sons, and yea i ifinished recordin about 1 hour ago, lmao late as hell, but word yo!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618 Last edited by zukdizzle : 04-11-06 at 04:02 PM. |
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04-11-06, 08:50 AM | #2 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: F510 8B3A
Beat is ok. Not my kinda beat but it's ok. Not feelin the hook. Your delivery is aight. It fits the beat but it seems to me like it could be better. Flow is good. Lyrics are straight too. Keep grindin
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04-11-06, 12:30 PM | #3 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
being white im jealous...cuz if i did a white power song id be hung alive.....ya emotion on the black power seems lame....you should reall emphasize that....sounds like theres a hiss in the backround distracting me from you words...but id didnt sound bad, so flow was ight....yep more more emotion....has potential to be a real good song...but as is, its average...re-do this song, and up emotion and it could be real good...nice concept n shit tho
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-11-06, 03:53 PM | #4 | |||||
Is Betta Than You
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IP: F7F9 B52B
aight thanx fa tha feed, lol and as for tha white power thing, its not like that, its like, black people are always tryna get over cuz they r black, they take advantage of it but not the right advantage, they say all this shit about slavery and minorities, but they dont know half of the reasons why they sayin shit, or what they even talkin about
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04-16-06, 07:25 PM | #5 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
ur clipping like a mofo...ehh @ this beat....nice message..good track man
RTF on some my shit
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