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Old 04-12-06, 04:04 PM   #13
T.I
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niiiicee. didnt know u had skillz hahahaha anyways, this is something outta ur style so i give u thumbs up for that. u did good here allthough u could have open'd it a different way.
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as i stroll in this world i see the difference.
from the past racisit shit is still with existence. <--- kinda lame but something like that u know.
kk whokidd keep trying though u ever need help u know where to catch me.
oo flow was a tiny bit off on some parts but it gets better and u need to work on ur structure.
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