hmmmm 1st due's real calm ... pretty laid back... Lyrics are really blazin'... nothing real hott there here... but not wack either... hook coulda been better... like teh repetitiveness... just the dud saying this goes out to you sounds like he's mad young, and kinda far away from the mic... this shoulda been more angry... not really feeling that hate... Your verse was the best verse lyrically... in teh begining fell off beat a lil bit... fell off the beat a lil more later on in the verse too... decent track though...

Anyway RTF... Check out that MC shit

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