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Old 04-10-06, 02:39 AM   #1
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This Goes out to YOU [NETCEE DISS]

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This goes out to YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tightness

1st verse = M.I

hook..wrote by me

preformed by me and Darion Jones

2nd verse Darion jones

3rd verse ME ----NETCEE DISS to faggots like j-poll n them !!! and ALL u TRASH TALKING textess !!!!!!!!!!!!1

fuckin gimps !!!!!

i gota do the volume lvls a bit better but....ehhhhhhhh im bent so...will do at a later date

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Old 04-10-06, 04:46 PM   #2
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 04-11-06, 02:07 PM   #3
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Beats not bad,

Your styles quite unique, not bad.. its different but works pretty decent, flows decent enough.

Hook works

Lyrics pretty decent not bad.
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Old 04-11-06, 02:28 PM   #4
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1st verse was decent...nothing special in my eyes....but ok....

hook is........eh......fuck it.....

2nd verse pretty good....i like this dudes flow and delievery...

samples is pretty cool.....

3rd verse.....flow is too slow for my taste...sounds off from time to time....lyrics are decent....it's either me or something wrong with my computer but you sound like you have a lisp or a really stuffy nose...

decent track...6.5/10
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Old 04-11-06, 06:52 PM   #5
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Cho
You kinda sound like Jet a little bit man, your voice I don't really like. your delivery on this song was kinda weak but I do like the way you try to be funny. funny artists go far in my opinon hahhaa, the hook was fuckin dope too hahaha.

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I don't really like the voice but some how I think it's flexxed to sound higher then it really is to make the song funny. the delivery was decent, the flow isn't to bad lol. this song just makes me laugh haha, not that it's wack funny it's just a dope funny diss hahha.

overall it's decent, not a big hitter ya'll coulda did better.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292
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Old 04-11-06, 08:19 PM   #6
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good beat


was solid all around


not bad


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Old 04-16-06, 07:26 PM   #7
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holyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sheep shit
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Old 04-18-06, 04:14 PM   #8
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hmmmm 1st due's real calm ... pretty laid back... Lyrics are really blazin'... nothing real hott there here... but not wack either... hook coulda been better... like teh repetitiveness... just the dud saying this goes out to you sounds like he's mad young, and kinda far away from the mic... this shoulda been more angry... not really feeling that hate... Your verse was the best verse lyrically... in teh begining fell off beat a lil bit... fell off the beat a lil more later on in the verse too... decent track though...

Anyway RTF... Check out that MC shit
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Old 04-18-06, 04:19 PM   #9
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Lyrics are really blazin'... nothing real hott there here... but not wack either...


wtf does that mean yo...

thats like saying....yo that ice cream realy sucked....but it was good as shit...
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Old 04-18-06, 04:21 PM   #10
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meant to say aren't... typo
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Old 04-18-06, 04:21 PM   #11
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ok.......................
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-04-06, 02:03 AM   #12
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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Old 05-13-06, 07:45 PM   #13
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Im Not Even Hatin When I Say, Straight Up U Have No Rap Skillz Dog Y Would U Comment Me A Fucken Lyrical Phenom Sayin U Dont Feel Me! U Would Never Compare To Tha Heat That I Come Wit Homie! Please, If U Dont Have Wat It Takes Then Stop Tryin! And Thats How I Feel!

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Old 05-13-06, 07:47 PM   #14
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LOL @ this coming 2 mins after i told you to fix your flow AND their being 3 ppl on this song and your talking some in general shit...

pfft..simmer down son
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