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New to RV
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IP:
Nice imagery in the peike...the to be kontinued iz kool...
stanza for stanza..your Best stanza wud prally B the klosing...It leaves you with antikipation and it al5o ha5 the Best imagery in my opinion...i dont kno mukh about mines or war but i thought minez werr put under the dirt so dat u step on em acKidentally and shit...so how u lose a Boot and u kan't see da mine? But yeah da5 my only sugge5tion overall...dekent drop..nothin spekial wif good imagery..7/10? u passed haha..
hollaatchagerrl
-Truth-
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