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ya lyrics were aiight.... still sounds like the same style ya been doing... just changed ya content... i actually liked the original before they started playing the hell outta it on every radio station every ten minutes or so...

ya singer... i think omma hafta pull a simon cowell on her... she's off key.. if ya listen to the pitch of da music and the pitch in her voice it's too distinctly different sounds... any real singer or musician would be able to pick up on that... don't get me wrong... she got potential but she needs more practice... either that or learn to work some studio magic on her vocals... hell, Al B. Sure couldn't sing for shyt but he had the girls panties wet... (until he sang live at the Apollo... career went to shyt after that...lol) ...she needs to work on her riffs also... they sound kinda generic

ya second verse was REEEEEEEEEALLL short... it was look the hook was da verse and ya verse was da hook...lol...

this woulda been a good remix if you formatted the song better... keep ya verses pretty much da same length... then you can punch ya hooks in... it's almost like ya had an incomplete direction for the song...

not a bad attempt though... don't put this on ya mixtape without fixing the flaws first... one

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