This beats nice,i have it somewhere..........
The flow is koo,falls off al il in some places but you bringi t back koo,deliverys aight needs uppin a lil tho.emotions aight,coulkd be upped.you dont seem that confident though.work on ya presence a lil.i liked the 1st vverse better.did you record em on different days?sounds different.
I liked the hook..............
Overall:Koo track,needs a lil work
Can you RTF here plz:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227049