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a love song, slower paced...tell me watchall think

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3835411

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yea...heard this beat before


I'm not really a fan of pre-packaged hooks, but sometimes the beat is so good you go with it...I think you could have ad libbed the hook


Are the first and second verses rapped by the same person?


Flow is decent...nothing outstanding


lyrics are decent...nothing outstanding


Yea...you def. need to ad lib the hook


I like the message of this track...But, your flow is adequate at best, common-place at worst.


Decent track


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This beats nice,i have it somewhere..........

The flow is koo,falls off al il in some places but you bringi t back koo,deliverys aight needs uppin a lil tho.emotions aight,coulkd be upped.you dont seem that confident though.work on ya presence a lil.i liked the 1st vverse better.did you record em on different days?sounds different.

I liked the hook..............

Overall:Koo track,needs a lil work

Can you RTF here plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227049

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Listening...

Heard the beat before...almost used it actually.

Flow is decent...still need to work on breath control and pacing of it. You'll get it eventually. Lyrics are typical for a love song. Heard the same shit before. Delivery is pretty good.

Overall, keep it up.

Return the Favor

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i have the beat.. almost used it to... so i feel like more could have been done with it... this wasn't wack ... but it wasn't anything special... the flow on the second verse was shakey .. .. i dont remember the line exactly on the third but i just heard somethin dumb corny....im not sure if im feelin the forceful delievery on the beat since the aaliyah vibe makes the beat laid back thought its semi up tempo...