Listening...
Heard the beat before...almost used it actually.
Flow is decent...still need to work on breath control and pacing of it. You'll get it eventually. Lyrics are typical for a love song. Heard the same shit before. Delivery is pretty good.
Overall, keep it up.
Return the Favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226176
Or did I owe you one..?