hmmm.... ok ... the articulation was lacking.. so you really couldn't pay attention. to anything u said for too long .like dude said this was basically a flow showcase......it sound like a baby got back flow.in a spot. the begining of ur hook was off like by just a lil but u got back on track fast ... the hook is cute... since u said u didn't spend that much time on it ... I feel u ... cause i be doing that shit ... so it was aiight considering..