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04-24-06, 06:50 PM | #1 | ||||
I don't lose
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Super Dick
IP: 9C2B 06EC
....its for the audio topical league....yep
SUPER DICK - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3839638 links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2727579 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2727585
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-24-06, 07:50 PM | #2 | |||
OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
wassup with the super wet/processed vocals at the start?
YUCK I could hear waaaay too much Cool Edit noise redux/ effect I like the beat I like your flow in this...I would love to hop on this (so many gay jokes could come from that) ehh If only your delivery and mic presence was better, this would be super bangin (again, read the title of the track) haaaa I liked the sound of this track...I wasn't really paying too much attention to the lyrics here, just the flow...which was hot 1 |
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04-24-06, 11:19 PM | #3 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
word...i didnt take much effort into this one....its for the audio league....speaking of hoppin on shit....hows that track comin....im gettin ready to put stuff together for the cd.....late may is the goal so you got time but jus checkin
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-24-06, 11:34 PM | #4 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: 0FCB F08E
hmmm.... ok ... the articulation was lacking.. so you really couldn't pay attention. to anything u said for too long .like dude said this was basically a flow showcase......it sound like a baby got back flow.in a spot. the begining of ur hook was off like by just a lil but u got back on track fast ... the hook is cute... since u said u didn't spend that much time on it ... I feel u ... cause i be doing that shit ... so it was aiight considering..
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