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Old 04-24-06, 06:50 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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Thumbs up Super Dick

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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 04-24-06, 07:50 PM   #2
Tha Q.
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wassup with the super wet/processed vocals at the start?

YUCK


I could hear waaaay too much Cool Edit noise redux/ effect


I like the beat

I like your flow in this...I would love to hop on this (so many gay jokes could come from that)
ehh


If only your delivery and mic presence was better, this would be super bangin (again, read the title of the track)

haaaa


I liked the sound of this track...I wasn't really paying too much attention to the lyrics here, just the flow...which was hot


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Old 04-24-06, 11:19 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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word...i didnt take much effort into this one....its for the audio league....speaking of hoppin on shit....hows that track comin....im gettin ready to put stuff together for the cd.....late may is the goal so you got time but jus checkin
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 04-24-06, 11:34 PM   #4
Fendi Fiasco
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hmmm.... ok ... the articulation was lacking.. so you really couldn't pay attention. to anything u said for too long .like dude said this was basically a flow showcase......it sound like a baby got back flow.in a spot. the begining of ur hook was off like by just a lil but u got back on track fast ... the hook is cute... since u said u didn't spend that much time on it ... I feel u ... cause i be doing that shit ... so it was aiight considering..
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