listen to what i speak friend, while ya watch this freak plummet..
..rush aint grimey and this dudes not Gutter..he jus drinks from it..
stab you with broken sword handles, namein off ways im beating you..
..ive had it..this is the last straw..the same one he'll be eating through..
your verses are Ass..givin new meaning to Bum Rush, fagget..
...last time he grabbed life by the balls, he tryed to teabag it..

vs.

i'ma put this dude on the shelf, his girls usually givin it up
she's got a dimpled chin, but its really a dent from my nuts
at ya show you’ll get dumped off of a stage, they’ll pass on you
you’ll get Kicked and Pushed enough to make Lupe Fiasco sue

not a bad battle. but precize, i'm gettin the insentive that you have prewritten verses dude. like, get more personal. also, come with more fresh/witty concepts. 'n try to make them worded better so that they hit harder. rush, your shit was mad play'd. liked two lines in that verse and the personals, dude.. could've been so much more effective. work on wordin, but i must say.. the "nuts on her chin" lines was gold. honestly, my favorite punch of the battle.

v/ precize for more consistency.

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