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Old 05-12-06, 12:28 AM   #1
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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word listenin...... likin the beat........ nice storytellin flow, not real intricate, but its decent, especially for tellin a story..... smerk on his face, lol *looks at title*

findin happiness in the worst of times, nice concept in this shit...... its short as all hell tho, u coulda made it alil longer.... the lil break/hook was alil weird but it works fine..... pretty decent track, MAKE THIS SHIT LONGER.... maybe add another verse inbetween the first and second one.... nice return omen
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