ight im'a leave feed for the soon ta be most successful girl out there

ight the beat i love..i think i might have that beat somewhere in one of my beat folders
the beat is very energized makes ya just wanna jump outta ya seat and start jumpin around lol.....but yea good beat chioce

im defintly feelin the hook its kinda generic but it hott and gets stuck in ur head real eazy...lol hell yea u got that good shit for when it comes to hooks cuz it defintly got me hooked like a fish

ight for ur lyrics they kinda generic id say they average...nuthin special but yea u dont have ta be the best lyricist ta put meaning behind ur words...u defintly have some enthusiasm in that vioce of urs...flow is ight u did well wit the flow
delivery was pretty good and i usually never worry bout quality cuz quality has nuthin ta do wit talent but ur quality is real good too...nuthin ta complain about there

ight we gettin inta the switch up near the end which i gotta say is dope and addicting as all hell fo sho...haha where the hell did u find that beat yo its real dope
"i was getting some head...i was, i was getting some head" lol that shit real addicting
shit playin back in my head for the next hour and a half haha
like i said before ur lyrics are ok nuthin special but i defitnly could listen 2 this a few times keep at it ma

overall this is way too dope of a song ta be slept on..i think these muthafuckas is in kindagardon or sumthin cuz they think it nap time but fo real this aint no shit ta sleep on...im feeling it more than michael jackson when he feels lil boys..haha...but anyway yea i'd give this atleast a 8.5/10...aint a deep track like ur other one but i'd bump it fo sho
keep hitting these nontalented muthafuckas wit the shit they aint ready 4

UPPIN FOR MY GIRL...

P.S: i just put ur song on my psp