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Old 05-22-06, 10:59 PM   #11
John Hensley.
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and I put the food on the plate...dont bite the hand that feeds u...
Im only fattening u up so…. niggas besides me could eat u....
u need to switch ur style like confused transvestites...
they matched us up like this....so u could feed off me and taste wat the best like...
those two lines were aight, the rest were disses, but they didn't have alot of complex shit, they were easy to understand which is good if you're spitting it live, but in text it's better to have something that takes more thought to get


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I wont even try, no reason to bring the gun and kick back
U winning is so 'far fetched', dogs have trouble bringing the stick back
I'll put the hammer down and I swung back to crush this geek
...watch this kid drop faster then Nick Fletcher did this week
Your lines were longggg as hell, reading that garbage gives me doubt
Raw's verse is crazy in the head.. the way that shit is just wack'd out
FUCK THIS IM GOING RAW!!!!!! I was about to quit cuz I already won dude
^^ but last time I said that out loud...guess what happen? I had you
yea, you took this, far fetched was nice. nick line was solid. wack'd out was pretty good. last line wasn't quite up there, but it was solid.


vote- glocks, ok battle, he took it easy. keep writing raw.
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